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JUST A LITTLE SOMETHING THAT I WROTE

Feb 12, 2009 - 24 comments
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hearts

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A CHILDS FEELINGS PUSHED DEEP DOWN INSIDE
SO MANY THINGS THAT I CHOOSE TO HIDE
I KNOW THAT I CANT KEEP RUNNING AWAY
I KNOW THAT I WILL HAVE TO FACE THESE DEMONS SOMEDAY

I HAVE TRIED TO BREAK AWAY SO MANY TIMES BEFORE
BUT I SEEM TO ALWAYS RUN INTO ANOTHER CLOSED DOOR
SO MANY PEOPLE CHOSE NOT TO LOOK AND SEE
WHAT I WAS FEELING DEEP INSIDE OF ME

NO ONE EVER SHOWED ME THE RIGHT WAY TO COPE
SO IN THE END I TURNED TO THE DOPE
AND NOW MY HEART IS TORN COMPLETELY APART
SO NOW I LIVE WITH THIS BROKEN HEART

STEPHANE

HERES ANOTHER ONE


SOME PEOPLE REALLY WANT TO DIE
IN A COFFIN THEY WISH TO LYE
SAILING UP TO HEAVEN BY AND BYE
THINKING NO ONE WILL BE THERE TO CRY

FASTER AND FASTER THEY FALL ASLEEP
STILL THINKING NO ONE WILL CARE TO WEEP
THEY BEGIN TO THING ABOUT GOOD MEMORIES THERE TO KEEP
AND SOON THEIR HEARTS BEGIN TO LEAP

SO BEFORE YOU GRAP FOR THAT LAST PILL
JUST REMEMBER IT IS SURE TO KILL
AND SOONER OR LATER UP THAT HILL
EVERYTHING WILL LYE STILL

STEPHANIE


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by pooket825, Feb 12, 2009
wow those are very deep they are very nice poems

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by frustrated431, Feb 12, 2009
THANK YOU I DONT WRITE EVERY DAY BUT SOME DAYS I JUST GET IN THE MOOD AND MY HAND AND BRAIN TAKE OVER IM GLAD YOU LIKE THEM I AM VERY SELFCONCIOUS ABOUT MY WRITING

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by sickntired08, Feb 12, 2009
wow, those were amazing.  The first one, I really connected with.

Thanks so much for sharing!

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by frustrated431, Feb 12, 2009
thank you and your welcome im glad you liked it

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by lori0615, Feb 12, 2009
Wow that truely was amazing. I really love to read a good poem.

Those poems gave me goose bumps. Please share more.

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by Cherie762, Feb 12, 2009
Hey Stepie those are good....the first one remember when one door closes another is always open you just have to see it/\\ and you will.....Load of love....Cherie

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by ladygeegee, Feb 12, 2009
That was really great. The last one I really related to. Keep writing. It often cleanses the soul, Heart and mind. It makes us think of something other than our conditions. Thank You !!!

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by SophieShine, Feb 12, 2009
beautiful Stephanie
really can relate to both of them
Thanx for sharing your talent

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by stilltrying1965, Feb 12, 2009
Stephanie they are excellent. I honestly dont know why your selfconscious they are great. Keep postin them J&K

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by frustrated431, Feb 12, 2009
thank you all of you it makes me feel very good inside and i needed a good pick me up and i will have more to share hopefully soon

thanx again
Stephanie

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by CHICKEN9, Feb 12, 2009
thank you.they hit home

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by PrettyKitty1, Feb 12, 2009
Oh My God, I can't believe I just read that! Wonderful, just wonderful!! I could not have come up with that!!!

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by MSKshelly, Feb 16, 2009
STEPHANIE THEY ARE VERY PRETTY... I TOO WRITE POETRY TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS.  IT THINK IT HELPS TO KNOW ONLY GET THEM OUT BUT TO BETTER UNDERSTAND THEM OURSELVES.

"NO ONE EVER SHOWED ME THE RIGHT WAY TO COPE
SO IN THE END I TURNED TO THE DOPE
AND NOW MY HEART IS TORN COMPLETELY APART
SO NOW I LIVE WITH THIS BROKEN HEART"

I HAVE BEEN THERE, I HAVE FELT THE BROKEN HEART BUT IF YOU EVER REALLY WANT SOMEONE TO SHOW YOU HOW....

AND THE WAY TO A HEALED HEART LET ME KNOW!

YA KNOW I LOVE YOU AND AM CONCERNED FOR YOU!
SHELLY


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by frustrated431, Feb 17, 2009
yes shelly i know you are and i have you and the others in the end its just sometimes the things i feel tend to take over my life and i get in these ruts that just seem to last so long thank you so much for your support it means alot to know that i have people out there that care

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by jollyman069, Feb 17, 2009
my god were they so good i couldnt beleive it....you should be published you are very talented

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by frustrated431, Feb 18, 2009
thank you for your kind words i guess i just might be good at something after all huh besides making everything i touch turn to stone

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by margypops, Feb 18, 2009
You are gifted , Stephanie, the first one touched me a lot and is exactly why I try to help on the child behavior Forum, we are having Trolls there I am afraid at the moment very sad,

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by frustrated431, Feb 18, 2009
the trolls seem to be everywhere cant people just leave well enough alone we have all been through so much anyway thanx for the compliment im glad you liked it

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by frustrated431, Mar 01, 2009
i guess i was just writing how i felt i just got home from the psych ward at a hospital and it helped me to see things more clearly thank you all for your kind words in support of my writing maybe i will have some moere real soon

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by aws01, Mar 01, 2009
You are truly gifted.  You should write all the time.  I only wish I had talent like that.  Stay strong Sweetie,  a better day is coming for you.

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by margypops, Mar 02, 2009
Keep writing Steph, its the best therapy wish I had your talent ..love Marg

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by frustrated431, Mar 02, 2009
thanx aws01 and margypops that made me feel atleast alittle bit better today atleast i dont feel as worthless as i did yesterday and dont worry more writing will come soon
Stephanie

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by teko, Mar 03, 2009
Awesome, I am jealous of you all who have such wonderful talent. Seems to be, mine is cleaning toilets! Uggh! Thanks for sharing that.

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by frustrated431, Mar 03, 2009
to teko

I dont think that i really have talent i think that everyone can right  just as long as they have feelings they ned to get out i just do it in this way others journal i think that if you tried you could write something wonderful too thank you so much for your support and kind words you have no idea how much it means to me at this time in my life i feel so lost and alone it seems to be eating away at my soul right now and the omly thing that i know how to do at this time of need is write i am sure you have yous own coping skills

thanx again

Stephanie

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