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572651 tn?1530999357

Season's Change

Trees stand proud but bare.
Green, gold, red - nothing but dust
Left of fall's passing.



Can you Haiku?  

Three lines, 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.  
Traditional haiku includes a reference to nature and seasons, but contemporary haiku can contain anything.

Come on and give it a try here .....  
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505094 tn?1240317431
I love trees and can see a painting in my mind of your Haiku.  I especially love them in winter.  They remind me of ballet dancers.  I hadn't thought of Mars in that way, but it does fit.  Charley
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572651 tn?1530999357
I should have added I am stuck on tress right now, perhaps because my back yard is full of leaves calling my name to come and rake them  ...
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572651 tn?1530999357

Naked trees on alert
shivering in the raw wind.
Feel the seasons shift



Charley - I like yours.  Neuros as Mars  (the warrior in mythology) , is quite the image since so many see their neuros waging battles against their patients.  
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505094 tn?1240317431
I'll try that.  Some how I think I need to write one about neurologists.  

Neurologists seem
to be much like Mars always
half steam and ice

I've never done this before-fun, Charley
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667078 tn?1316000935
Great!
Alex
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