I make beaded and wire jewelry for my special friends.
Quick note before work.
I read all three parts of your story; nasty and brutish world there. Dis seem like a journey of self-discovery and transformation, through a glass darkly, and broken.
best - Pip
oh that's cool furballs! my uncles ex wife made "beaded lamps". they were really "retro" but they were so cool. if she would've sold em she probably could've made a ton of money off of them.
Huh. You know, I actually think I like this. Perhaps because I tend to strongly dislike "modern poetry" and this has feel to it that reminds me a bit of....shoot, can't recall who I'm thinking of. Frost?
I'm sensing a deliberate structure here but I'm not catching what it is. It flows well too. I was going to say I'm not sure about the last line, but I may have just gotten it. or not. But that's the idea, is to make you contemplate, eh?
Reading as a past time when raining, eh? So do it well.
I think poets must find that the most amusing aspect of their work, when the readers find meaning in it that even THEY didn't consider as being there.
I'll have to go look at your others. (Ah, just caught the Emerson reference you made).
Oh, and yes, that's an apt description. I had just read Cormac McCarthy's "The Road" and reread Erickson's "Malazan book of the Fallen" series, and decided to experiment with the darkness of those worlds. Which is why the dialogue is scant and has a rough, American Western feel to it (at least, tha was the idea).
I've decided to include SOME elements of humour should I continue it, least the reader expire from despair.
Kids drain away a huge chunk of creativity if you aren't careful to set time aside away from them. Of course, they can be great sources of creativity of well. trying to get time to yourself to write can be difficult, with them running about underfoot.
My wife started out with beads and wire and got very into jewelry making. She said the big difference for her was when she began working with the jeweler's torch and drill she picked up. It gives you options for working with the stuff you don't have with just pliers, wire and beads.
Do you get supplies locally or on-line?